Experimental film - crit

After our crit we made several small edits to the film, we also fixed the export problem that we had ran into after finishing the first draft of the film. The main feedback that we had received that we could work on was that the film lost something during the middle part of the film, although they couldn’t describe in detail what they thought it was missing. Both me and Chris had a similar inclination that the middle had been lacking something so we knew what they were trying to say, the only solution to this that I could come up with is that at some points I had picked out the wrong character’s photos in the middle or that the photos weren’t quick enough for an interesting climax. Besides from that the film received fairly positive feedback with our peers picking out either the photography or editing as the best feature, which goes to show how both me and Chris contributed fairly equally.

After a lot of help from support staff at Stores, we finally managed to fix the export problem we were having before the crit so that our finished film was the right size and quality to show our work in the best possible way.